Date: 2007-10-28 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvirgo1956.livejournal.com
That was sure Hot and Cold. I liked it. Not a flame but you need to go back and check out your punctuation on the talking side of the story. Other than that it is a great start.
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